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you've taken advice on lighting i see :]
vast improvement.
theres a few little white spots on the inside of [her] right leg that looks to be nothing more than a mistake in leaving things forgotten in layering.
used a gradient for her hair shine - which is okay - but you didn't do anything for her tail. which. if she did in fact have a tail, it would probably have the same amount of shine as her hair. [unless she didn't take care of it as much as the hair on her head.]
uhhhh... other than that you're improving quite nicely, uh, i hate the gradient in the background, it feels cheap just cause its just white to gray. add some solid black to put weight back on the right side for balance.
if you don't wanna do that, then ill go ahead and comment on how the brighter end of the gradient is on the left, and the light source for her is on the right.
this is all assuming that the gradient as it stands is unintentional. if it is intentionally the way it is, then other than the black and sharpening, i got nothing.
OH make sure there is local light on the girl. IE her raised arm generates shadow if it is getting in the way of the light source. and the bandaid, though mostly in the light, still would have lighting of its own due to texture and such.
That aside, thanks a ton
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Also, check out her inner ear. Okay to make the outside the same color as her hair, cause thats what happens, pick up a cat and examine it if theres one nearby. the inside of the ear doesnt usually grow hair. though hair grows in the ear, it usually isnt fur, its kind of like a whisker.
So I dunno. Your call on that one, just shouldnt be the same dark color as seen in her hair.
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The quality of your lives depends on what you make of them! The only limits to adventure are the limits of your imagination!
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Is this a dagger which I see before me, The handle pointed towards my hand? Crap.. I'm getting just as delusional as Macbeth >.<;
SAVE THE TREES! D=
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